The Dream House

The Dream House

Hopeful dreamed about the day when he could finally build his dream house. He saved for years and thought about it constantly. It would have a large wrap-around porch for his family, a spiral staircase leading to an upstairs media room where he envisioned watching lots of movies with his family and friends.

He had almost saved enough money to begin the project. Eagerly, he went to the banker, only to find out that he didn’t have quite enough money to begin. He would have to wait. Discouraged Hopeful turned away.

But then he found the opportunity of a life time. An acquaintance introduced him to Subtle, who showed him significant ways to reduce costs by wiring the electricity with less expensive products. Some did not meet building code requirements, but Subtle convinced him that the codes were too strict and unnecessary. “No one will ever know,” he insisted, “especially since the electrical wiring will be concealed behind walls.” When Hopeful considered the savings, he realized that they were so large that he could begin building long before he could otherwise afford.

Hopeful was excited. He began making plans and soon the foundation was poured. The beams went up. The house was wired and then the real fun began. The walls were covered with faux finishes only a decorator could do. A media room was installed that would compete with the finest.

Hopeful invited his friends and family over. Celebrations were held. Movies were watched. Fellowship was shared. His dream was built. He was having the time of his life.

But then…

The electrical wires began to fray. But Hopeful didn’t notice. The walls hid the evidence.

His friend, Concern, who knew better, asked one day, “How are you able to afford such a nice property?”

“I cut a few corners,” Hopeful admitted.

Concern was an electrician. “You should tear the walls down and replace the wiring,” he urged. “You stand at great risk to lose everything that you have worked to build.”

Hopeful thought about Concern’s advice. Maybe I should do something, he thought. But then Carefree called and wanted to join him in fellowship at his house. Maybe someday.

A few months later, Concern asked if he had thought about tearing out the original wiring. “Not yet,” he admitted, “but nothing has happened. Really…my house is fine.”

Concern’s advice kept ringing in Hopeful’s ears. But he didn’t want to take the time to make things right. I’m having too much fun, he thought. Besides, what are the odds?

So Hopeful ignored Concern’s advice and continued with his fellowship. He and Carefree had by now become very close. Since he met her, he was having more fun than he ever imagined possible.

But then…

Tragedy struck.

The circuits were overloaded and when Hopeful least expected it, a fire broke out. Sparks began to sizzle. He thought he had the fire under control but soon it spread beyond management. He had to vacate the property and call for help. But before help could arrive, it was too late. Hopeful watched as orange and red tongues engulfed his dream. The house burnt to the ground and everything he had worked so hard to build was completely destroyed. Hopeful was devastated.

As he surveyed the damage and wept over the loss of his dream house, he consoled himself with the fact that he at least had insurance. But when he submitted his claim, the insurance company refused to pay. Since he had not built his property according to code, they were not liable. Hopeful was forced to not only clean up the enormous debris left behind by the fire, but he had lost his entire investment.

Now he would have to start completely over.

Concern arrived on the scene to help with the rebuilding. Concern was the only friend who had warned him to correct the error in the first place, but he never said, “I told you so.” Instead he guided him with instruction and reassured him that he could start over and do it right this time. Then he gave him a builder’s manual.

The cleanup took much longer to complete than Hopeful expected. There were obstacles, delays and extra expenses that he was not prepared for. The task was difficult. The hardest part was trying to deal with his memories of all the fun times he had at his house and especially fellowshipping with Carefree. Each time he drove to work, he had to pass by his old house. Seeing pictures of Carefree and his old house brought him to tears. He often caught himself daydreaming about the past. Each time he would scold himself for being so stupid that he ignored Concern’s advice. It was hard not to be jealous when he drove down the street, especially when he saw other families outside having fun. He thought about how long it would take before he could afford to build again. Sometimes he was tempted to cut corners again. But each time he brought up the subject, Concern was there to encourage him to build it the right way.

When the cleanup was final, he moved into a small apartment and began saving his money again. With Concern’s advice, Hopeful was determined to do everything right this time. He worked and saved and worked and saved. Finally, he had enough money to rebuild his dream house, complete with the wrap-around porch, the spiral staircase and the media room for entertaining.

Hopeful pulled out the manual that Concern had given him. He read it again and again. Its rules were simple but unrelenting. Even though he was sure that he could build on his own, he asked Concern to help him oversee the construction of his new house. He agreed. The house was more expensive to build this time, but Hopeful considered the investment a wise one. He wanted to make certain his dream house was secure.

When he finished building, Hopeful was very happy. Just as before, he desired to share his dream house with others, but this time, something was different. He invited many people to come see his new house. But instead of entertaining for the sake of pleasure, he had it in his heart to fellowship with a purpose. He wanted others to know the perils of building a house with faulty wiring. He wanted to warn others so that they wouldn’t make the same mistakes as he had made.

The joy that he found in helping others was tremendous. His mess had turned into a message. Hopeful was finally filled with hope and he was very satisfied. Not only had he built his own dream house, now he was helping others build theirs too.

"Therefore everyone who hears these words of mine and puts them into practice is like a wise man who built his house on the rock. The rain came down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against that house; yet it did not fall, because it had its foundation on the rock. But everyone who hears these words of mine and does not put them into practice is like a foolish man who built his house on sand. The rain came down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against that house, and it fell with a great crash." Matthew 7:24-27





So, here's what I'd love to hear your comments on: In this story, what did the dream house represent in your life?

20 comments ()

1. Donna Scott wrote:
This was an eye opening story. Makes a person think about not being in such a rush and doing things the right way, our Fathers way with His guidance and His words in mind at all times. Still its not a bad thing to hope. But we need to do so with caution and prayer and if we do so His blessings will follow. I love it! Thank you for this wonderful reminder!

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 8:20 AM

2. Cheryl wrote:
I thought it was very good.

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 10:16 AM

3. Les wrote:
That was awesome

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 10:59 AM

4. darla wrote:
WOW! WOW! WOW!
I am blown away. Again you show yourself strong to leap out on yet a other venue of writing.
The moment I finished I had to say a prayer to remember my life is built on the rock, of JESUS and his plans, not mine.
I do the Father's will not my own.
Really hit me in a personal area right now...
Blessings~darla

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 12:01 PM

5. Autumn wrote:
Great story! When I read this, the first thought that came to me was 'I need to send this to a friend!' she is always cutting corners in life and i am waiting for her to finally cone over to "The Other Side" of life and follow God. Great story Christy, Thank You!

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 2:19 PM

6. Pat Wehde wrote:
I love the way you write....Thank you

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 2:45 PM

7. Barbara Spillman wrote:
I really liked this story. It was a great example of what's being said in the story in Matthew 7. It's interesting to note that after the house was destroyed, Ms. Carefree was no-where to be found. She only took pleasure in Hopeful's company when everything was going great, but the minute the chips were down, she abandoned him. Where true friends, as Concerned stuck with Hopeful, even when his advice was ignored - interesting. Do things right, or don't do them at all.
Thanks Christy, keep up the great stories!

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 4:10 PM

8. Leonard Wood wrote:
It reminded me of my life, and how quickly things can change when your life isn't in tune with God. But it also reminds me that God is always there to help me rebuild it again. He doesn't want to lose me.

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 5:19 PM

9. Debbi wrote:
This story echos in my life to many times to count. We need to get over wanting to have it now and wanting to control our out comes.
Control is a illusion. When need to let go and let God.

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 8:12 PM

10. Roxy wrote:
What I got was to read Gods Word (manual) and to listen to The Holy Sprit (concern)and that good time friends are only around for the giving.To share your story(witness) of Gods love with everyone
to keep them from the same mistake.
You always hit straight to my heart.Love your work!
Roxy

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 9:31 PM

11. Shelley wrote:
Great story, Christy! Again you stretch and have reached new heights. Your imagination and creativity have joined together with God's purpose to bring a poignant story that everyone who reads it will be able to relate to and able to identify areas in their lives that need to be rebuilt the right way.

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 10:10 PM

12. Barbara Spillman wrote:
one more comment: the dream house in my life represents anything in my life that I have tried to accomplish with my own efforts that proved to be futile with little or no success; while the dreams, goals or visions I have committed to God, while not without obstacles or struggles, succeeded because they were built with "God purpose and strength"
"He who builds a house builds in vain, unless the Lord builds
the house" Ps. 27:1
thanks for the reminder to get God's take on my goals, and then build it with His purpose, and His strength.

Mon, February 16, 2009 @ 11:02 PM

13. Anita Weaver wrote:
I think the story was well written and kept my interest. The story line is one that has fit us all at some point. It is learning to not cut corners that allows us to see the beauty in our God! Cutting corners to me is cutting God out of our life. We are to go through the valleys, facing every corner, in order to achieve more and higher mountain tops! What a wonderful story about God's growth in our lives!!

Tue, February 17, 2009 @ 9:29 AM

14. susan wrote:
this story really made me think about the things in life we i long for or long to do, and how not to make compromises to reach them. nothing is worth giving up the right things in life. we seem to think some times that cutting corners is easier and cheeper but it always cost us more time, tears and or money in the long run.

Tue, February 17, 2009 @ 1:50 PM

15. Theresa wrote:
Wow! This story really makes one look on how they cut corners in their life and what happens when they do cut corners.

Tue, February 17, 2009 @ 2:38 PM

16. April wrote:
This story is great Christy! When I read this I thought about my dream house which is my health (being the perfect size). I've tried to get healthy the quick way with out sacrifice and each time the Lord reminds me that I can't do it on my own and I must trust in Him. It also reminds me that the outer appearance is not as important as the heart, and the Lord is more concerned with my heart than my jean size. Thanks for the encouragement Christy. God Bless...

Tue, February 17, 2009 @ 9:04 PM

17. Christy Johnson wrote:
What great comments you all had. I loved reading them. I especially liked Barbara's insight about how Carefree was nowhere to be found afterwards! I'll def add that in a rewrite! Thanks everyone!

Mon, February 23, 2009 @ 7:11 PM

18. Andi Hawkins wrote:
The Dream House represented my "spiritual house." You either build it on the rock or on the sand!!! I love this! Very creative. It reminds me of a great book, "Hind's Feet in High Places" by Hannah Hurnard. AWESOME!!

I am so pumped that your blog is popping up in my feed reader now! I will know as soon as you post. Woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wed, March 4, 2009 @ 2:30 PM

19. Donna Schweitzer wrote:
One of my dreams was to raise my children in the same church all their lives and that dream burnt down because we focus on people other than God. But God, rebuilds lives and has called my daughter and son-in-law to be full time missionaries in Mexico. I will daily keep my eyes on God and not people.

God bless you,

Wed, March 18, 2009 @ 11:41 AM

20. B. Gessner wrote:
Wow! What timing ....God heard my weeping last night and wiped the tears this am when I read about your skirt. He comforted and encouraged through you choosing the scriptures about Joseph. (Always been a favorite to turn to). I couldn't relate to the PMS thing any more since the good Lord has taken me to the next womanly level of menopause (now post), however there are similarities when your hormones are so confused that stability seems like a foreign word. The part about the comfort zone of the couch and classic "munchie" food hit home when my body parts that used to work well....like my shoulder, my knees, etc. refuse to comply other than to let me know it's time for another round of ibuprofen and the heating pad. Your description about your sudden sewing inspiration was God saying to me, "I get you, I know the desires of your heart, what makes you tick....remember I'm the one who made you." It made me feel "normal" and not like I'm the president of M.O.M.S.---Menopausal Orbiting Mothers Screaming. So, if its any help or encouragement, your writings came today when I needed it the most.

God's timing....I read about John being led to sell everything as well and felt your heart in the situation....I don't have to tell you God hand-picked him for you, just keep skating, lean into the Lord and John on the ice of life ....the roses will be thrown and the medal won because the Lord is at the helm in your all's life.

We love you all... Luke's mom

Thu, October 29, 2009 @ 10:06 AM